Tuesday, August 11, 2009

I need your advice

Hello dear readers, passerbys and random visitors! I'm putting together my lookbook/wholesale book and I have nearly everything settled except for where to put the font! So I have set up several scenarios that could work. I can't make up my mind and since you guys did so well with the model clothes a few months ago, I'm asking for your advice! Which font lay out should I use?

Please click on each image to view each layout:





Thank you so much in advance!

19 comments:

Kristi said...

I think in the first option, because it's in front of the jar and the jar is closest to us (bigger) to begin with...somehow makes more sense to me perspective-wise.

chelsea said...

I think I like the first one!

Elia said...

I first went towards #4. I like the first one too though. Hope you'll put up more pics of it when you're finished!

Unknown said...

first

somehow the shadowy part on the left side of the jar makes the bold print (name of your piece) looks good :)

kadler said...

Ooh, I like them all, but my fave is where the type is at the top left! Good luck :)

charinthecity said...

Hiya,

I like no. 4 as the format was nice and compact, I didn't have to scroll to see the text and the graphics.

Anonymous said...

4 for sure, cause it's not obstructing the jar nor competing with the pictures. I liked the 1st one at first but I think with the words infront of the jar and your necklaces, it takes the focus off the jewelery.

Tiwi said...
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Tiwi said...

I liked 1st and 3rd.
In the 1st one the words have a more explanatory purpose. Seeing the picture first creates an inquisitive curiosity about the product, like "what's that?". Then upon seeing the word you find out more about the product. The 3rd one looks more logical because it makes the words introduce the product thereby creating a sense of investigative curiosity when looking at the picture.I suppose it depends on whether you want more emphasis placed on the words or the picture. If I saw the product in a magazine i would prefer the 1st one. But I found the 3rd one easier to view online due to the size of the whole thing and having to scroll. By reading the words first, I could focus better on examining the picture.

Pip said...

Number 1. Bottom left. Looks more professional I think. Nice photography by the way. Have yet to begin my learn to knit video. Hope you're working on yours

blue moss said...

it all looks so great....
i like the first one the best
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Mandi said...

With these options i def lean towards number one. but the most ideal would be to situate your text at the bottom right because it is natural for the eye to start in the upper left and travel to the lower right. I dont know if you could shrink the image of the necklace then situate it there....or if it would look too "off". just a suggestion :)

Elyse said...

I really like it centered in the bottom middle (#4), but I also like the first option. =)

Huey said...

I like the 1st best. 4th makes sense for compactness too.

Hello Lindello said...

upper left one or last one.

Tiffany said...

wow! thanks for all your input!! I'll let you see the end results in a week or so
:)
muchomucho gracias!

kendalee said...

I haven't read any of the other comments to avoid being influenced but I like the first one. Have no idea what the technical reasons are but intuitively it the layout that most appeals to me. :) None of them look bad though so you should go with the one that feels right to you!

knack said...

I know I'm late to the party but I vote for the very first picture with the text going across the bottom.

So excited to see all of your new work! I'm so impressed by the big steps you are taking....I mean a wholesale catalog....wowsa! Keep up the good work! xo

Francesca said...

#4 for me